PART 2 : Same rainy street. But now the atmosphere is heavier, quieter. The sound of rain feels louder.

Camera opens on the man in the grey coat still crouched — staring at the white cloth under the bicycle seat.

Slow zoom in.

He doesn’t speak.

Behind the girl — the four men are closer now. No longer just watching.

Sound: low bass tension rising.

The girl’s breathing becomes faster.

Girl (whisper, German):
“Bitte… Sie dürfen nicht fragen…”

The man slowly stands up.

He looks past her — directly at the men.

One of them steps forward into light. Face partially visible. Expression unreadable.

A silent standoff.

Then the man in the grey coat finally speaks — calm, sharp, controlled (German):
“Was ist das hier wirklich?”

The girl flinches.

Suddenly — one of the men behind starts walking fast.

The girl panics.

She grabs the man’s coat.

Girl (almost crying, German):
“Sie haben gesagt… wenn ich es nicht verkaufe…”

She stops mid-sentence.

The man in the grey coat notices everything — the fear, the signal, the cloth, the timing.

He turns slightly toward her bicycle…

And reaches for the white cloth.

CUT RIGHT BEFORE HE TOUCHES IT.

Silence.

Then:

BLACK SCREEN.

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